Even though I have never really lived there, going to my grandmother’s farm always seems like coming home. The Feeling begins as soon as I cross the threshold of that quaint little house and tumble into the arms of waiting aunts and cousins. The sense of welcome overwhelms me. Then, there are the cozy rooms_ the ceilings don’t seem higher than six feet ­_ with their crackling fireplaces that make me want to snuggle down into the feather- stuffed chairs. But the memory that always lasts the longest is the smell of Grandma’s biscuits and pastries cooked in her coke-fed Stove. Yes, only in Grandma’s house do I feel the warmth and welcome that always seems like coming home

Topic sentence          Going to my grandmother’s farm seems like coming home

Specific Support₁       greeted by relatives

Specific Support₂        coziness of house

Specific Support₃        smell of home- cooked food

Reworded TS            I feel the warmth and welcome