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Consider the following question of IELTS.

Some people think that humans are allowed to use animals in medical experiments to discover new drugs, while some other consider this procedure inhumane. 

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In cases like this, classic four-paragraph essay, the outline of which presented below,

is the best procedure.


                                                           INTRODUCTION

present the situation

both sides of the argument

what you are going to do in this essay

 

                                                PARAGRAPH FOR/ AGAINST:            

Topic sentence

Argument 1 or reason 1

Argument 2 or Reason 2

Argument 3 or Reason 3

(Example, Explanation, or supporting detail)

 

 

                                              PARAGRAPH AGAINST/ FOR           

Topic sentence

Argument 1 or reason 1

Argument 2 or Reason 2

Argument 3 or Reason 3

(Example, Explanation, or supporting detail)

 

 

                                                           Conclusion

present the situation and your opinion

future statement/ clincher

 

 

Below is an example.


Every year, millions of animals undergo painful suffering or death as a result of scientific research into the effect of drugs, food additives, cosmetics and other chemical productsWhile most people think animal testing is necessary, others are upset by what they see as needless sufferingThis essay looks at some of the positive and negative aspects of animal testing.

Many medical treatments and procedures have been developed from experiments on animals. Since animals share many features with humans, scientists use animals to test the safety and effectiveness of newly developed drugs before pilot testing on small group of patients. Medical teams practice new operating techniques such as transplants on animals. Without animal testing many procedures or new drugs would be extremely unsafe.

However, many people are concerned that animals are suffering unnecessarily and cruelly. They do not believe that every new drug needs to be tested on animals, especially with the huge database of knowledge and modern computer models. They also are worried that many animal tests are ineffective, pointing out that any drugs have had to be withdrawn from the market despite extensive testing. They particularly feel that animal testing should not be used for non-essential products such as cosmetics, shampoos, soaps, and cleaning productsFurthermore, some campaigners would like to see certain tests replaced and more humane methods used. We need to make sure that millions of animals who are used for testing new products are treated with the minimum of suffering.

To sum up, some animal testing may be unavoidable at present; however, treating our fellow creatures as mercifully as possible will demonstrate our humanity. Let us hope all creatures on earth will be treated fairly.


Read the following example, too. 


Should governments spend money on art, when they have so many other important issues and concerns?

Throughout the ages, man has tried to create beauty through painting, music, sculpture and other artistic expressions. It seems to be a basic need of humans to surround themselves with art. However, some people feel that government money spent on art is wasted, particularly when there are so many other demands for it. This essay will examine the conflict between those who say art is important and those who feel it is a waste of money.

It can be wrong for governments to spend large sums of money on art. Too often, governments spend unwisely; they spend money not because a picture is good or a museum is needed, but for political reasons, cities end up with huge statues or empty expensive buildings that are used only by a few people or the elite. Another point is that the artworks are often chosen to represent social or political rather than artistic ideas. The city gets yet another statue of a leader or an ugly monument to national aspirations. A third point is that governments often respond to fashions, and tastes in art can change very rapidly. Without careful advice an expensive collection of worthless paintings or tasteless production can be the result.

However, it would be wrong to say that governments should not spend any money at all on art. Painters, musicians, and composers cannot survive without financial support. Rich people or large companies do finance art, but then it is often inaccessible to ordinary people. Governments have a duty to make this art available to everyone. However, the most important reason why governments should support the arts is because an appreciation of art is one of the things that make life worthwhile. Humans do not need just shelter and food. Creative people have always tried to look at things in a new way and to make the world a better place through painting, music, poetry, calligraphy, sculpture, dance, and numerous other forms of expression. While art may not make us immortal, it does make the world a richer place for future generations.

In conclusionalthough people do need to be provided with the necessities of life such as housing and medical care, governments also have a duty to provide their citizens with something more. They should make sure that they pass on beauty, ideas and expression to the next generation and make art available to all instead of being the possession of only a few. I firmly believe that spending money on art is a vital part of a government’s responsibility, and I am confident that my country will be able to contribute its share to the richness of the world’s art and creativity.

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